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Review:NaidatheRavenclaw says:
TARTAN RIBBON. BEST THING EVER.

Ahem, I'm attempting to write coherrent reviews at one in the morning, so apologies if none of this makes sense.

But seriously, the whole thing with the tartan ribbon was amazing. It gave me strange flashbacks (or would it be flashforwards...) to GoF and the thing about her having a wreath in her hair. It was a great little burst of her canonness (is that a word?...I'm making it a word!). It's good to see Minnie had a thing for tartan and tight buns even at this age.

Your Tom Riddle is absolutely perfect, too. He was so calm and devious in this chapter. Glad Minerva picked up on that, though. I really like the dynamic between them, so I hope they have a few more encounters xD

GOING TO READ ON. And probably make even less sense in my next review xD

-Naida

Author's Response: Wheelll, this was all for the depth of character challenge. So in my head I was like 'lets break Minerva down and explain all thoes little bits' although my explanations esentially ended up as 'Peter' but, ah, yeah...

I really don't think Minnie ever changes, like ever. So of COURSE she'd have her hair up in a bun.

Tom kepy coming out gay for the longest time. You have no idea how long it took for me to make him not camp. HOJSdajojsaidjs. I was confused, to say the least.

-AC


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