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Review:Secret Santa says:
Back for another chapter!

It was nice to see a chapter from Robin's POV. She definetely seems like a well rounded character, I like how she is feisty and individualistic and not really one of the popular girls. The potential love triangle is also intriguing, but it doesn't seem like Sarah brings a whole lot to the table other than crying all the time. Is Dai Chang Cho's older sister?

Robin and Oliver's interactions were very nice, and getting intoa quidditch argument was so in character for him. The part with filch was funny as well, and I like how Oliver stuck up for her to the Slytherins.

If I may make a suggestion, it would be to just add a few more descriptions, like for example, you could tell us what type of curse Flint used and describe the effects a little more.

Overall this is a really good story and I will definetely read the rest of it

Author's Response: Dai is Cho's cousin, yeah I need to bring more of Sarah but for now she doesn't have an important role for now.

Of course you can make a suggestion and that suggestion is a good one :) I'm glad you like the story, it makes me happy to see people are enjoying Oliver's tale.


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