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Review:ToReleaseMe says:
Last review!

Ah Sirius reacted just the way I imagined he would to the break up. And, like the situation with Cadence, I am having a bit of a hard time believing how easily Ivette's plan is coming together. I get that it's just a story (and yours at that) so I probably shouldn't be so adamant about my opinion, but hey, that's what these reviews are for, right?

I'm not sure if you're giving the characters more than one chapter from their POV, but even if you're not, you've set up some good personality information about them. In the short time we get to look through their eyes we actually learn a lot about their feelings and opinions of the situations at hand and I really like that.

I really think this is one of the best changing POV stories I've read on hpff! The writing is so well done, and I haven't actually read any plots too similar to this which makes me sad that you don't have more reviews :(

Can't wait for the next update and you can expect more reviews from me in the future! I hope you don't run in to too much writer's block and get another chapter up soon!

- ToReleaseMe

Author's Response: Haha, does that mean I got Sirius right? I was so worried about him not sounding right. Yes, this part of the story has been really easy... hm, I guess I should think about that in chapters to come. Originally this was supposed to be a short and simple story where the end was where the real surprises came, but now that I'm doing everyone's pov I'm not so sure what going to happen anymore. Plus, I intend to give everyone two chapters.

Thank you so much for your kind reviews! I really enjoyed reading them. It might be a while for the next chapter because I have been kind of stuck with James, and writing quidditch, and what I want to happen. I really should try to get back to it, but first there are some other things I want to write. Maybe next year I'll be able to get to it.

Again, thank you so much for the reviews!


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