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Review:ToReleaseMe says:
I'm here again! Haha you're probably sick of seeing my name in your reviews by now.

Poor, poor, naive Cadence... She really doesn't have a clue, does she? I do like to see her character more affected by her decision to dump Sirius (crying in her dorm room, etc.) because the last chapter made it seem like she wasn't so devastated about it.

This was a short chapter, so I don't have too much to say about plot or characterization really. I'm sort of wondering if Cadence is going to play a larger role in this story than I originally thought she would. Is she going to think that Ivette and Chelsea want to be friends with her after this? Or will she learn about their scheme if (and when) Ivette hooks Sirius?

I'm interested to keep reading (even though there's only one chapter left until I've run out! Oh no!) haha

- ToReleaseMe

Author's Response: Haha, I'm not sick of you. I love reading reviews and replying to them, especially because it really helps me sort out my own thoughts on the story and characters, and build ideas from those thoughts.

Yes, poor Cadence. She does not have a clue. I think in the last chapter, because it was written by Ivette, it didn't really focus on Cadence (obviously), plus she might have been in shock, just a bit. Here, it's really sort of sunk in.

This is a short chapter. Probably because if I wrote any more whining I'd punch myself or seriously annoy the readers. Cadence will end up playing somewhat of a larger role, at first she was just going to be strictly minor, but she doesn't just give up without a fight. But I can't give it away before I've even written it. It could still turn out completely different from my plan.

Thanks again for the reviews!

xxEnigmaticEyes16

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