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Review:ToReleaseMe says:
It's me again with your next review!

Ok, so I'm actually very interested by this chapter because it makes me change my mind about what I've previously said. Seeing things from Ivette's POV, I think she actually needs Chelsea more than Chelsea needs her. She appreciates Chelsea more, I think, and I don't get the feeling that she thinks of Chelsea as a lackey like I previously thought I would. I like reading Ivette's POV, actually. I find her quite funny with her insults of Cadence (who reminds me so much of Lavender it isn't even funny).

Now about the plot. I find Cadence's ability to believe Ivette and Chelsea somewhat unrealistic. I was surprised that she didn't just deny it, get angry and storm out. Maybe she's not aware of how manipulative and mean Ivette and Chelsea are? Having Cadence believe the girls' claim about Sirius really does help the plot move along faster, but I find it hard to believe.

No spelling mistakes, grammar is near perfect, once again. Oh, and I like your story title, I don't think you need to change it :) Looking forward to the next chapter!

- ToReleaseMe

Author's Response: That's very true. Chelsea might be fine on her own but Ivette is in need of an accomplice. Turns the tables a bit. I remember thinking about how it seems like a sort of tug-of-war of who really has the power in their friendship. I'm glad you found her insults funny. Although I see the connection I did not base Cadence off of Lavender... well, maybe unintentionally I did now that I think about it, they are very alike.

I'm sorry you find Cadence's ability to believe Ivette so unrealistic. She is not aware of how manipulative Ivette and Chelsea are (not yet anyway). Ivette's manipulated tons of people but she rarely ever gets caught doing so, so it's not really known that she's manipulative. And Cadence is supposed to be dumb and gullible, making her easily fooled.

Again, thank you so much for the reviews! I really appreciate them.

xxEnigmaticEyes16


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