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Review:Santa-of the secret kind. says:
Hello, it is me again :). I like this chapter a lot and how they all found out about Sirius' will. Your description is still very good, as is your characterisation. This also flows well. It gets better and better every chapter. It is also really engaging to find out more about Aislin and all the secrets within the plot. It seems like you have a great idea and i cannot wait to see more of your work on this and other stories.

I hope you don't mind some CC. There were only a few errors in this but one thing I found a bit...iffy was that Sirius had so much money to give out. Surely Harry would get a bit more. Also, you wrote this 'untimely death is in no way in part your fault' which would be kind of awkward as you write a will before you die and he didn't know how or when he would pass away.

This is not really criticism but I like your idea's of how Sirius had an heir. But in JKR's books, it clearly says that the only person Sirius has is Harry (Remus and Tonks too if you get what I mean). But if you do not intend this to be canon it is fine!

What a great start and I cannot wait to see more from you.

Your SS xoxo

Author's Response: It is not going to be completely canon. As the story goes along more will be revealed as to why Aislin is the Heir. Plus there was a reason behind the untimely death remark, Sirius will know that he was going to die young in battle.

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