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Review:Secret Santa says:
Back again for chapter 5!

I liked the further developments to Oliver's character, giving him some added layers of depth. First, we got to see how he kind of put academics on the backburner, which was toally in character. I also liked how he was totally awkward around girls, it makes sense given how much time he devoted to quidditch that he might not have the best social skills.

I really enjoyed Percy's inclusion. He is such a prat, but its totally in character. The parts with Fred and George were a nice touch as well.

I liked how Oliver stuck up for Robin, and their relationship seems to be developing at a nice pace so far.

Author's Response: Santa! Another present! Yay XD

Thank you :) Yeah I always thought Oliver wasn't very smooth, I mean he seemed so devoted to Quidditch and all. Percy seems like a prat but he isn't

I love Robin :)


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