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Review:Cassius Alcinder says:
It's me from the forums here with your review!

You did a really good job of capturing the dark, angsty feel to the story. The descriptions were very good, and even though it was a romance, there was a dark, very creepy feel to it.

The characterization seemed accurate, we could see how they were both really smart and ambitous, but they have completly different concepts of right and wrong and their lives are being pulled in opposite directions.

Tom threatening to kill her was pretty scary and totaly in character from what we know of him. Since we don't see Minerva's romantic life at all in the books, it might make sense that she had a traumatic experience like this at a young age.

Overall a very effective and very angsty story

Author's Response: Hi!
Thanks. This was suppose to be a light-hearted story when it first started but that didn't work out as well as it should have haha.

I'm glad I got the characterisation of Tom right because he has definite personality.
Thanks again :) x

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