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Review:Pretense Of Perfection says:
I definately don't think I'm a fan of the older Avery brother. Damon has gone down a few points in my eyes for his jealous outburst, but I guess you can't actually blame him for feeling that way...Elsa and Sirius definately have something more than friendship between them, even if neither one of them cares to admit it.

I really am super excited to read all about their trip to Egypt! Egypt has always been a place I wanted to visit, and I love the rich culture and history. It seems that Elsa and I share that in common.

I noticed a few typos/spelling errors, but nothing that detracts from this amazing story. There are also a few instances where the tense is switched, or verbs where there should be adverbs, but as I said, nothing major. I really have become obsessed with this wonderful fic, and can't wait to read the rest!

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