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Review:Secret Santa says:
Hello :)

I'm going to start by saying this is the last review of the 'week one' gift. Any reviews on one-shots that were written and posted before this one are also a part of week one! Sorry I was a wee bit slow with the last three, but time evaded me and homework loved me xD

So this story. Though I'm not a huge Teddy/Rose shipper, I loved this. It put a little bit more of a twist on Rose [not making her the perfect daughter but not totally making her the bad one either]. It really was a different way of looking at Rose. And Teddy's character was good too...going along with something he knew would be wrong was really surprising with him. Definately not the usual way Teddy is in most stories. But I loved him all the same! My only issue was with the second to last paragraph. There were a lot of He/She pronouns and it got confusing when you switched from he to she in that paragraph. It totally could have been me, but word choice editing that a little may help clarify. But other than that bit of confusion on my part, it was good!

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