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Review:Shhh...It's Secret Santa says:
Hello :)

I loved this! It was such a delicate and beautiful piece. But I did catch two small things:

"He finds it amusing how his family do not warm to her, though he admits it is perplexing." ~Does instead of do

"It is one moment with of her of many that he wishes he can relive and while they stand above the Seine he can pretend it will last forever." ~The beginning of this sentence is a wee bit confusing.

But other than those two small things, it was amazing. It was filled with emotion, of the deep understanding that everyone seems to forget about when writing Bill/Fleur [not that I have read this pairing a lot]. They fail to reach and explain why it is Bill loves Fleur, even though his family is more hesitant. You introduce us to her soft how she is through not so hostilel eyes. It's really a beautiful characterization. And it was even better that you characterized her first, and then Bill. It really highlighted thier relationship, making her seem much more human and nice-different than even the Harry Potter novels themselves. I also love how Bill proposed to her in French. Really creative and beautiful! Love it!

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