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Review:Serendipity1234 says:
That. was. AMAZING.
FANTASTIC Al/Eliza action ;D I loved Al talking to Paul! It was SO sweet! And I'm so glad that Al finally decided he loves Eliza! Conviction- absolutely wonderful. I'm dying to see what happens next...I have no clue what could...and I'm incredibly curious about this devious plot Dom constructed. Obviously I know who it involves, but what is it about?? Revenge on Scorpius- does that mean they're going to tell Rose about all his creepiness? Or just torture him? I can't wait :)
And I love how it circled back to fourth year with the parallel between them discovering their feelings. Paul is such a meaningful part of everyone's lives :D If they get married, he should be in the wedding.
Lily is an interesting character. She's just become involved in the more recent chapters and I'm curious to learn more about her. She seems adorable..like a silly, fun, hopeless romantic, combined with a possibly..mature side? I definitely see her as determined and sort of stubborn -at least when it comes to James treating her like a child. All your characters are wonderfully complex and I really like how you fit that into such a light-hearted and hilarious story.

AND I LOVE YOU FOR UPDATING THIS BEFORE THE QUEUE CLOSED!!! I can't tell you how excited I was :D

update soon!

Author's Response: you know, the idea with al talking to paul actually started with me wanting to make a spin-off one-shot where al talks about eliza to the fish. then i thought it would be perfect for the story! so.. here it is. i'll probably still write the one-shot though to give a LITTLE more depth. he kind of took care of that already though. but there are certain parts where even I'M going, 'what the heck is he thinking!? I NEED TO KNOW!!' hehe. but anyways. thanks for reviewing!!

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