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Review:magiccarpet says:
I loved this first chapter...I can tell this is going to be a very fun story to read. I can always tell when stories are going to be good or not based on the length of the chapters; this one was 3,000+ words, which means there's good character and plot development, as opposed to 1,000 words where everything is just thrown together lol.

I look forward to future chapters and the interplay between Ron and Hermione!

Author's Response: Really?:O Thank you so much!

And if you want to know a secret *starts to whisper* I've already written this entire story ^_^ Well...I have. but I haven't, if you get what I'm saying. It's a sort of rough draft, if you want to call it that:P

What you're saying about the 1000 word chapters is what got me started about it because the rough draft was 10 chapters long and only 1000 words each. I honestly thought I was going to post it and I thought it was a well written story. So I got back a couple months ago to post it, and it was TERRIBLE. I mean, downright AWFUL. The first two sentences Ron and Hermione meet and I was like *facepalm* :/

Then Ron grew stalker-ish, and in that draft, she never got a job at the restaurant, they just BAM started going out. I felt like I should torture people and make them wait a bit...maybe a bit of tension:D Yup. That's how I do it.

ANYWAYS. So, this is what I do to avoid studying for finals. THANK YOU SO MUCH:D For both the review and a distraction from studying;D I hope to have the next chapter up after the queue break:D

Thanks for the review!
HarryandGinnyForEver

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