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Review:HP fly on the wall says:
DAMN. That was actualy.violent. I mean Sirius kind of.scared me here. I actually felt bad for Peter. Sirius definately needs someone to keep him incheck, he has a bit of a cruel side. At least he does in this depiction of him. Although i'd have to say he does in the original version too. I mean Peter is a coward, and he deserves to have the shit scared out of him a little bit, and he deserves to be in Azkaban, butt.that was little much. He didn't deserve that. But more than that, it's just the fact that Sirius had the urge, or instinct in him to do something like that it.shows some of the bad parts of his personality. I love Sirius but that was not good.
Anyways, EXELENT chapter! I loved it! 10/10!

Author's Response: Yeah... this scene was one of the first that came to mind in the first stages of planning, and I can see where it would be controversial. I love Sirius and I love his flaws, but I think he may be capable of torturing someone in that situation - he's really been, er... instablized by James's death. I'm glad you still liked the chapter and that Sirius's nasty side wasn't too much of a turn-off :) Thanks so much for reviewing!!

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