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Review:Roots in Water says:
OH!- I just love the way this came together. I think that you did a brilliant job of creating the atmosphere for this story.

I'd never before really thought about that scene on the street with the thirteen muggles but it is really such a crucial scene in the book. I think that you did a fabulous job of creating realistic characters in very few words- you gave Christine life and breath and it was so heart-breaking to know that she was going to die. And then read her death.

I also really enjoyed the scenes of the aftermath of the "explosion" that you interspersed in the story. They were so well done- little scenes that built up and up to have a powerful impact.

The last sentence was perfectly done. It really summed it up for the reader and gave the story closure. Even though I already knew it was Peter in the bar it was still a moment of "Oh my gosh- it's Peter, it's PETER!"

I really did enjoy reading this one-shot and I'm so glad that I clicked on the link. It was beautifully done.

Author's Response: I was so nervous about writing this story, not knowing if I'd be able to do the prompt justice -- ToujoursPadfoot requested it specially, and I'm in such awe of her writing. :D So I'm really glad to hear you enjoyed it! I like writing moments not a lot of people think about, because there's not as much concern about subtly stealing work, I think.

I /love/ that last sentence, if I may say so while keeping my modesty intact. :D I worked it over several times before keeping that one. But really, thank you so much for this review -- really! It totally made my day! ♥

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