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Review:Emerald_Eyed_Bookworm says:
Brilliant! I absolutely loved your writing. One of my favorite things was how you deliberately seemed to space your writing. The pauses between sentences were filled with so much overwhelming emotion. Such an amazing technique.

I only noticed a few typos:

-"The usual monotonous agony filled with hunger, a pathetic, invisible existence and that perverse circle of attempt and failure on the finding a job front.": Perhaps 'employment front' might flow a bit better.

- "that place where you and slip in and out of dreams at ease, that wonderful place where reality is what you make it": I believe the 'and' between you and slip is a typo.

But overall I blown away with the sadness and despair. Absolutely loved it! :D

Author's Response: oh wow!!! Thank you so much!!! I am so glad you liked my technique, to be honest with you, I didn't even know I had a technique... I just write!!! But thank you none the less! Don't worry I'll fix the typos pronto, I am so sorry, but it seems that no matter what we do, me and my dad can't find them all!!! I am glad though you found this chapter sad, because that was what I was going for! Again, thanks so much!!! I really appreciate how you took my request and read and reviewed my story! :)

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