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Review:Secret Santa says:
Hello from your Secret Santa in the Corvarium! :) I'm here to leave some reviews - so keep an eye out! ;) (Also, sorry this is a day late - the next ones should be on time, I just got confused!)

I thought this was really funny! Your Molly is a quirky kind of girl who made me laugh. "You know, the ones that saved all of you and your family's lives. Or the ones that killed them. Either way, my family made a difference." Heh. Regardless, the Weasleys had a large impact!

I enjoy reading Molly's inner monologue - her thoughts are humorous to follow. I liked your introduction to the Weasley family - that bit about Audrey having a bell was brilliant. Lucy made for a great little sister as well - I liked the contrast between her and Molly. I did think that Percy was a bit over the top, but then I guess Percy always was a bit like that, eh? :) I think you've got an excellent start here, but make sure you're able to keep up characterization - all of them have really awesome potential!

This flowed really nicely and was quite enjoyable. I'm interested in seeing where the plot goes from here! I saw no glaring grammar mistakes, which was a plus. Also, forgot to mention this earlier - loved the quote from Doctor Who! It was actually so seamlessly blended in that I didn't notice at first.

Excellent job! I'll be back with more reviews shortly! ;)
♥ your Secret Santa

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