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Review:Secret Santa says:
Hello :)

Once again, beautiful story! I love the sad edge that is ever present in many of your stories...I'm such a sucker for them. I did notice two small things:

"My need for her had not dwindled, my love had only intensified and a strange kind of longing had grown in me like me fear had grown towards the end." I believe it was my not me you wanted.

"Though she still sang to me, her voice sounded force." ~This should stay in past tense so force should be forced.

Other than those two spots, I didn't see any other errors. I did love that you did Sirius' point of view. For some reason, I have not read many stories in a guy's point of view, but you write them and they're mesmerizing . It makes the guy seems a lot more real, and easy to relate to. And your description that went with the characterization was amazing. You have a way with words that's just...it's great. Good job!

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