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Review:javct says:
Here with your review!
Sorry for taking so long to reply, real life caught up with me for the first time in a while :/

Anyway, I really enjoyed this story. This is the first Eileen/Tobias fan fiction that I have ever read (and seen) but (from what we knew) their relationship was never stable.
I think you portrayed their marriage really well though. Tobias reminded me a lot of Severus.

The tone of this story was really good. I'm glad that you kept the story the length that it is though, because it really showed their relationship and set the tone and foundations for their marriage (I'm assuming this is before Severus was born).

The characterisation is good. Even though we didn't get much information from them in the books Eileen is how I imagined her to be. Tobias was good as well. I could honestly classify this as canon because I think that Tobias only went sour after Eileen died :)

I think this story works; I really enjoyed it :)
Here's a somewhat length-y review to make up for the late response. Happy holidays!
Jaz, 10/10

Author's Response: Real life always comes first, so I don't mind that it took a while for you to review. It usually takes me a while to respond!

There aren't very many of them out there, especially on this site. I looked and there's about 20 here.

I'm glad you picked up on the parts of Severus I put into his parents personalities. Basically, I got their personalities from what we know about them, and from Severus's personality.

The story isn't tied to a particular time, but I sort of envisioned it prior to Severus's birth (or while he's at Hogwarts).

I'm glad you like the tone and length and how I characterized them.
Thanks!
Houlestar


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