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Review:Secret Santa! says:
Hello :)

I'm back with another review from your Secret Santa.
Oh I love the plot! I was not expecting that ending AT ALL! I was preparing myself for a do-or-die fight scene or a tension-filled deal or something along those line - but definetely not a baby Harry!

You've got the tension from the war down completely. I've always seen James as the joval joker but it makes sence for him to be more withdrawn and tense when coming home.

'The golden light reflected on the thick fog that had settled on the village, giving the cottage an eerie feeling' - that right there just set the creepy scene and set me off wondering what I was going to find.

Quick note, in the first paragraph I think you used 'them' instead of 'they' -just so you're aware :)

I also loved Lily's characterisation, although she only said one line;
'James Potter,' came Lily’s exasperate whisper. 'Revive the Healer this instant!'
- it made em smile because I would just imagine her saying something like that.

Hope you carry on with this and I look forward to reading more :)

Until next time,
Secret Santa

Author's Response: SANTA again!

Oh I,m so glad you enjoyed this story and was surprised by the ending! I wasn't so sure it would work at first but the reaction is pretty good apart from a couple people.
James and Lily were fun to create and I'm glad I managed to give Lily's personality through that single line.

Thanks for such a nice review and for pointing out that error, I'll fix it as soon as the queue opens up again!

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