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Review:Secret Santa says:
Hello :)

Though I am not a huge fan of Sirius/Lily, this story was really good! Once again, your description and characterization are amazing! You really seem to understand Lily's character and way of being, making it easy to relate to her feelings. And I really like how, after she storms from the common room, Sirius is the one who ends up following her. It brings up my favorite line :)

"Or does he have to have you running around for him like a dog?" Sirius coloured and looked away uncomfortably." ~This made me giggle. I couldn't help it. I figure Lily doesn't know and it just...I couldn't help but love it.

Also! I loved the imagery and the clock comparisons! You have it in the beginning and the end, and it's an excellent way to tie the two parts together! It fit in with Lily's personality really well, and just helped the flow of the story. So great job!

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