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Review:A Ravenclaw whose identity shall remain a secret. says:
This was awesome! It was really well written, even though there were a few mistakes with grammar. For example - '...accept the organism growing inside her.' the accept should be except, and '“You look after your little brother now wont you”' there should be a comma after the 'you'.
Anyway, I loved this chapter, because you uncliched it even more, by Victoire thinking she was bulimic, instead of the usual 'a family member guesses straight away' type thing. And you put an interesting twist on the scene in the nightclub, something not usually seen in pregnancy fics.

So yeah I like it. A lot. SO PLEASE UPDATE SOON BECAUSE I REALLY WANT TO READ THE NEXT BIT. 9/10. =D

*wants to add to favourites but can't because that would ruin the SURPRISE*

Author's Response: Eek 9/10 yey :D Thankyou. The accept I have actually changed XD Its in the queue at the moment :D AND YOU NOTICED THE VICTOIRE THING, no one has really commented about that, someone said they found it funny xD but no one said anything about it being a part of the de-cliche.

Thankyou, this has made my birthday start well :D x

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