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Review:Santa, of the secret variety. says:
This was great! It was a clear introductory chapter, in which Dominique was given great characterisation, and I really like how you have used Dom as the main character, because usually it's the more major next generation characters that are focused upon in fics. That sentence actually kind of made me sound like I know what I'm talking about. Wow. Anyway, you've really managed to make a cliched topic be uncliche (though I do love pregnancy stories like this xD), which is awesome because that was the point of the challenge, and it makes the story a whole lot better.
There were a couple of grammatical mistakes I saw (just the odd comma or two), but nothing major that detracted from the flow of the chapter. Overall, a great prolougue! =D
(I was going to write my name here with a little smiley face, but I didn't because then I realised that it would defeat the point of it being a secret Santa =P)

Author's Response: Haha I wish you had written your name XD

Aww thankyou for the gift, I love me some reviews :D I am glad you like it and think I am De-cliche'ing it. Thanks for the review...

NOW... who are you? xD hehe I'm intrigued :D

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