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Review:Secret Santa says:
Here I am the 3rd and final part of your 1st gift is here, remember to look out for the clues to my identity I drop in every now and then.

Oh this story seems promising, I like how you introduce the main character with so much detail. I really feel like I know the character. Be careful about putting the emphasis on 'Plain' especially if she ends up with Albus because that can be very Clichéd (You know what I am talking about if you read a lot of Sirius/Oc. The plain girl Sirius wouldn't even notice somehow gains his attention and they fall in love) it can become very predictable. I love Laura the most at the moment, don't know why XD She just seems adorable and Jane is great as well :)
One more thing, you introduce Alice as Alice Longbottom but she greets herself as Alice Fields? x

Love it so far. Cant wait to read Ch 2!
xxSecret Santaxx

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