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Review:Secret Santa says:
This was simply beautiful. Andromeda's thoughts streaming out of her were lovely to read. Andromeda loses so much throughout her life-- her parents, her sisters, her husband, her daughter-- and you captured her loss perfectly. The first half, with Harry and Teddy, was very well characterised-- the little nod to Victoire/Teddy was so sweet. Love Victoire being obsessed with Teddy's hair-- and I enjoyed reading it. But the second half-- wow! The whole idea of the photograph was brilliant, and her not remembering what young Bellatrix looked like was enthralling. Your writing is simply lovely to read, and I'm so glad I've discovered your stories. The nightmare, with Andromeda supporting Voldemort, was the perfect end to the chapter. I can't wait to read more.

10/10

Author's Response: I know! She loses everyone! It's so horrible! I actually... er... enjoyed writing this chapter (I can't believe I just wrote that, lol), because it wrote itself for the most part, even if it was pretty difficult to do. It's hard to know how much emotion is enough.
Ah, the photograph... that will turn up again later! ;)
And Teddy/Victoire - it's just meant to be. It just is.
I was so worried about the end of the chapter - for so long I just couldn't write it, and the dream sequence, when I did write it, just seemed so dodgy. It's growing on me, though. Very, very slowly.

Thank you for the review!
Aph xx


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