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Review:Secret Santa says:
Wow! This is a really good start to what promises to be a wonderful story. Your characterisation of young-Narcissa, young-Bellatrix and young-Andromeda are wonderful; it's so difficult to write young children and you've pulled it off perfectly. I find it interesting that you've characterised Druella and Cygnus as actually nice parents-- so often we see them as cruel and overbearing. Not all pureblood parents are like that, surely? It adds a new perspective onto the whole thing; Narcissa and especially Bellatrix end up so pureblood-heavy, and it's interesting to thing of why if they're parents are so nice. I can't wait to read more.

10/10

Author's Response: Oh gosh, young children are horrible to write! I don't even remember what it was like being a young child! It was like... downsizing the characters, lol.
I know - I get so annoyed when people make pureblood parents abusive/horrible/etc. because it kinda gets old and, actually, there's not really any evidence that purebloods are like that towards their children at all.

I'm glad you like it - it took me so long to actually decide to write it.
Aph xx


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