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Review:Secret Santa! says:
Hello :) I'm here with the first of your Secret Santa reviews :D

You managed to capture the Weasley family atmosphere that is portrayed so well in the books, into your story. You can clearly see the love shared between Fabian and Molly and helps you understand why they're mentioned in the books so frequently - she obviously missed them!

I've always thought of Molly being the younger sister with two overprotective brothers, but your interpretation seems to fit so well! Fabian learnt from his sister and her achievements to become his own person.

Your characterisation was spot on. Molly was overprotective but loving, Arthur completely doted on Molly and was caring, Bill (or Billy) was well represented as a hyper two year old and I loved the dragon tou for Charlie, a hint at his future. Brilliant.

I hope you continue with this, although it'll be sad to see Fabian die :( Perhaps you'd be able to include more information about Gideon? It'll be nice to get to know him more aswell!

A brilliant start! Well Done!

You'll be hearing from me soon,
Secret Santa

Author's Response: SANTA! I'm so excited!

Thank you so much for your nice comments. I'm happy that you liked my characterization even though it wasn't what you imagined.

the second part is in the work and it will include more of Gideon for sure. Probably some more of Billy as well; I had so much fun writting this piece, I'm glad you enjoyed it, Santa!

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