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Review:Cassius Alcinder says:
It's me from the forums here with your review. This was a great start to what seems like will be a very interesting and orginal story.

The description of the workplace was great, you could really feel the drudgery and repitition of working in a large bureacracy like that. Molly's characterization was great as well, we usually picture her being very rule abiding seeing as how she was Percy's daughter and all that, so i like how you made her the complete opposite of that.

I really wonder how Molly ended up becoming a death eater, and how the organization was still in existence after voldemort's defeat. You definetely have a lot of potential to work with there.

Author's Response: Well, I'll do my best to make Molly's story exciting.

It's really nice to hear that my descriptions are getting better. I don't really enjoy writing them; actually, I write the fun bits first and add the boring fillers later.

Thanks for the review! It did wonders for me, inspiration-wise -)

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