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Review:peacock33 says:
Well I found this chapter to be very interesting. I liked both Rose and Hugo a lot and would like to see more of them. Olive's defense of her and Scorpius' actions seemed really weak and I was confused by Olive's explanation for that night. Are you trying to say that she and Scorpius have no romantic feelings for each other at all or not? Was she being honest about what happened, when she said it meant nothing and they were imagining Rose and Louis? I'm not sure what is worse, them liking each other or having no real feelings and just betraying Rose for no real reason. Scorpius said something about a spiked drink, were they supposed to be really really drunk? I guess in some way there is no excuse that is really acceptable for what they did and for lying about it after, but I hope Scorpius doesn't really like Olive, as I think the story already seems to have enough drama with her other boys, and I would like to see Scorpius and Rose work it out if possible. I find infidelity fics really interesting and powerful when the relationship is dealt with in a realistic manner. I would love to see more of what Scorpius is actually thinking in all of this. I do see why Rose would choose to make up with Olive and not Scorpius. Being friends with someone, especially when they probably won't be as close as they were before, is a lot less risky that trusting someone as a boyfriend/lover after they have betrayed you. Anyway, can't wait to see where this is going.

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you found this interesting. Hugo and Rose are lovely characters and I'll grant you your wish you shall be seeing more of them! Yes, her excuses were really weak :(. Olive doesn't have any romantic feelings for Scorpius and as for him neither does he. Everything that Olive said was true and in my mind they slept together because they were drunk (not enough to not remember, but enough to do things they wouldn't do if they were sober) and talking and both virgins who wanted to see what it was like. There really is no acceptable explanation with what they did, but I hope it seems realistic that Rose would ask and Olive would try and come up with a reason. Don't worry! I have absolutely no intentions of anything happening with Olive and Scorpius! In all honesty if Rose and Scorpius ever work out it will be in a sequel as I find there's no space for it to happen here and really if I wanted to do that I'd have to put it in either Rose's POV of Scorpius's. And I'm thinking of doing a sequel anyway, if I get enough people wanting me to. Hmm, they are rather interesting now that I think about it, but the infidelity in this story is merely a side plot and as I only have some experience with this sort of thing I can only hope it comes out realistic. I'm glad you see that, I wasn't sure if that would work or I'd just have to stop them being friends all in all. I mainly just wanted Rose to still be a character and that's why I kept their relationship going. I can't wait to see where I take it either! Thank you so much for reviewing!! (:

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