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Review:Courtney says:
Well, I am glad Olive finally decided to stop being a selfish coward and that Rose got her say. But I still have pretty much no respect for Olive. Her excuse for that night was so lame and didn't seem to excuse her or Scorpius' actions at all. I have no reason why Rose would want to be friends with her or forgive Scorpius, but I am happy she has been the bigger person and is going to try and move on from this. Has he bothered trying to apologize yet? At first I wanted Rose and Scorpius to get back together as I like that ship, but not unless he has to work for her and really changes. But so far, Rose is one of the characters that I actually like in this story so I hope that whatever you do, she gets a happy ending and that her friends and relatives actually appreciate and respect her. It seems a little unfortunate that so far all the most disloyal, selfish people have been Slytherin in this story, including Al at this point. It seems that you have hinted that Olive is going to have some kind of love complications with Al, James and Louis, and I just wanted to say that so far she isn't really that likeable so I hope you don't have every guy (including Scorpius since he slept with her) falling all over her, as I wouldn't really find that believable at all; and I hope that she changes her ways and doesn't go around destroying any more relationships, this time between cousins and brothers. I hope this isn't too critical; I think you have an engaging and interesting writing style am interested to stick with this story, more to see what happens to the other characters like Rose, Dom and Hugo. Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response: I'm going to be honest with you and just say when I wrote that chapter on Olive being with Scorpius I didn't think about what affect it would have on the story until two chapters later after I posted it. And I know the excuses were lame, but there are no excuses for doing that and I figured that people would at least try and make them. I think the reason Rose wants to see if she can still try and be friends with her is because she can't imagine life without her, but Scorpius hasn't even apologised and I doubt they'll ever get back together. As for the happy ending I'm thinking of doing a sequel in either Rose's, Spencer's or Dom's POV where they'll get their happy ending and more will happen with Olive, but you'll only see a little of it, like you're only seeing a little of Rose, Spence and Dom now. And don't worry, guys are definitely not going to be falling all over her :) And no, this is not too critical, I actually love it, it gives me so much to think about and improves my characterization so thanks!!!

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