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Review:CambAngst says:
In response to your author's note, I thought it was wonderful!

Such a warm, inviting, touching portrayal of Molly's family, parents excluded, of course. It brilliantly complements the characterization of her in the novels, both as a dedicated, loving mother as well as a very protective one. It must have been devastating for her to lose her brothers so soon after the time of this chapter.

I thought you nailed Molly's reaction to her mother's attempt to set her up. She responded with passion tempered by grace. Completely in character for an aristocratic young woman in whom the seeds of her future life with Arthur have already been sown.

I also loved your characterization of a young Bill. It was perfect for a two-year-old, albeit a slightly precocious one.

I do hope you write a part two, although if you carry this all the way through to the deaths of the twins, that's going to be hard to read. I mean, I'll read it, anyway. Just saying it's going to be hard.

Well done!

Author's Response: Oh wow, thank you so much for htis kind review. Especially about the characterization, I was a bit scared of how people would react to young Molly!!

I always so her as a passionate and fiery gilr, much like Ginny was in the books. She would have toned it down a bit with maturity and raising her family but she most definitly was a passionate woman!

Billy was just so much fun to write! Yes, a little precocious but it fits what he became, right? Head boy and top grades?

I am working on part two but I'm not sure where I'll stop. I've already grown fond of Fabian and killing him is hardly something I can imagine right now. I'll see how it will turn out though, we never know, I seem to like writting long stories.

Thanks again!

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