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Review:Secret Santa says:
Oh wow... I absolutely LOVE this!

I love how you portrayed Roxanne through this; she is very wild and in many ways untameable, and extremely brave! You showed her pride and determination to win against Lysander really well, and her constant taunting of him. I love how she was so knowing about everything but this one important thing, on which she was clueless!

It was just brilliant the way she would take a point to far just to prove herself right, and the constant taunting attitude that she would go through a heck of a lot for. She just loved to get Lysander's attention, and didn't know why, and you showed it just brilliantly!

I love your portrayal of Lysander, too. He was playing along with the banter really well but there were subtle hints that he wasn't as completely taken over by it as she was. And then when they were in detention, I loved how he was half being his banter-self and half the person he wanted to be, trying to get Roxanne to realise - it really got his feelings across but helped us see it all from Roxanne's point of view.

I loved their relationship that you showed - their quidditch banter, how they annoyed each other as much as they could, how they had the funny looking-at-each-other thing going on... and the trophy room scene was just amazing! I love how they were swapping between banter and confusion as they tried to work out the other person, and then how Lysander eventually just went over to Roxanne.

Also, the fact that they were going on to a proper relationship was really great - there's far too many random snogs going on in fanfic, and you wrote them so amazingly I would not have wanted them to be apart!

Definitely 10/10!

~Secret Santa

PS. Would have loved this just as much if next-gen wasn't a favourite genre ;)

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