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Review:Cassius Alcinder says:
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This was a very intersting insight into Narcissa's personaity and family life. Knowing what we know about Lucius being a death eater and everything, it definetely makes you wonder if Narcissa really loved him, or if she just married him for his money/ blood status. You did a good job of showing how she actually was in love with him, but at the same time, she seemed to be in denial about certain aspects of his personality until she finally caught him red handed.

Is Narcissa your favorite character? Because you are very adept at writing her. Her emotions and the issues she deals with were presented very well in a believable manner. We could totally sympathize with how she was so dissapointed that Lucius was cheating, but at the same time, she wanted to raise Draco in a comfortable and stable envoronment, and wouldn't do anything to upset that.

The potrayl of Lucius was spot on as well. We can see the nasty, controling personality that we see in the books, but we can also see the charms that would hav attracted Narcissa in the first place. that's a difficult balance to achieve, so good job on that.

Author's Response: Hey! Thank you so much for the wonderful review!

I am happy to know that you found this interesting, and Narcissa's personality well-portrayed.

Hehe yes Narcissa is my favorite character :) And it flatters me to know that you think I'm adept at writing her. It means a lot to me, thank you! I am glad you could sympathize with her and understand the situation, as that was what I'd been aiming for.
Lucius was a little hard for me to write, but it's nice to know you found his personality balanced and believable.

This review put a nice smile on my face :) Thanks a lot once again for reading & reviewing!


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