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Review:AC_rules says:
Hi there :)

This was a lovely, sad, little one-shot. I love it when things like this take hold of you - its such a nice feeling - and I thought you pulled it off very sucessfully.

I liked the dynamic of the relationship you created: its nice to see couples not working functionaly and how you created the issues that were all seated in Astorias doubt about his feeling was very believable. The argument was good too - both Astoria and Draco staying pretty much in character. Anyway, I pretty much loved and I'm really glad I read it.

The only thing I would say is that it confused me slightly when you switched to second person, but that only threw me for a minute. I can see what you tried to do though that - but maybe you could make the transition a little smoother? Anyway, thats alll I have to say.

Lovely one-shot :)

-AC

Author's Response: I switched to second person.whoops, I didn;t even realise. I do have a habit of doing it so I'll have a look through and see if I can pick it out. I really happy you liked the couple dynamic. Unfortunately not all relationships end happily so it was fun to play around with the deeper feelings of resentment and mistrust. Thanks so much for your review :)

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