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Review:accioHPFF says:
Hey!

This was really fantastic!

You did an excellent job writing this! Everything flowed very well and it was generally brilliant. I didn't see any mistakes, which was fantastic.

You seem to be able to just select the right word to use, and your choices just slot into the story. I wish that I was able to do the same! :P

You built up Narcissa's character brilliantly, I can imagine that is exactly how she would be.

Also, I'm glad you used Dean and not Harry or Ron. I think most people would try to, but I can't imagine her being so willing to talk to Harry- even though he saved her from Azkaban.

This review is most probably useless because I can't fault you! Honestly, this story is pretty much flawless!

Great job :)

-accioHPFF! :)

Author's Response: Nah, the review is certainly not useless! I love reviews that don't point out any faults (makes me proud :P) though of course that doesn't mean I don't welcome Constructive Criticism. However, sometimes I do like reviews that tell me the stuff they liked rather the faults, so I loved your review :) thank you!!

I am glad to know it all flowed well for you, and that you found my word-choices as well as Narcissa's character good.

I also thought along the same lines, that she'd not be so willing to talk to Harry or Ron, but she hardly knew Dean so I thought it would fit, I didn't want to put in some nameless or not known OC either, because I think the person delivering the information of the death also had a role in the story.

Anyways, glad to know you liked my story. Your review made me smile. Thank you so much!!


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