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Review:adluvshp says:
Tag!!

Woah. This was a very impressive chapter. I quite like your writing style and narrative. Though I'm not a Ginny reader, I really like how you've portrayed her here. The dark feelings were very well written. The story flowed nicely too.

The part about Tom coming back to her because of the dementors was very nicely captured. Over all, you did a brilliant job with this piece.

It was a captivating, intense and impressive read, and I liked it.

Good work!

9/10

Cheers!
AD (AditiDraco95)

Merry Christmas from the Slytherin House!

Author's Response: Oh thank you so much for choosing to read this! It's not often people do it and I love receiving feedback on it!

I always thought that JKR left this part out in the third book. It seems impossible to me that, after all she went through in her first year, Ginny would come out of it completly unscathered. These things leave marks on her person's character and take time to heal. Plus, having the Dementors around that year, I can hardly imagine that something else would come back to haunt her.

Thanks again for this review, you make me feel a lot more confident about this first chapter; now if I can just finish the second one.

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