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Review:CambAngst says:
OK, I seriously did not see that coming! It was brilliant the way you introduced this concept of Rose being rumored to be pregnant. Whether or not it's true -- I guess I'll find out -- the way you delivered it caught me completely by surprise.

Just to get it out of the way, you have one small typo right at the beginning: "Walking up really is one of my least favorite activities." I think it should say "Waking up..."

That tiny blemish aside, this chapter is really solidly put together. I love the way you use silly little thoughts and details to pull the reader in. The idea of Rose screwing up her face into the mirror is hilarious. The little dig at her grandparents was terrific.

You're off to a terrific start. I can't resist another chapter...

Author's Response: That scene with Eileen was a lot of fun. I tried to think of a funny way to find out about a rumor, and that's what I came up with.

Thanks for pointing that out! I did mean waking up haha, typing fail.

I'm really glad to hear you're enjoying the story!


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