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Review:sophie_hatter says:
Yay! Chapter 2! And I loved it! It's another winner and it's great to meet the 6th years.

I love the idea of getting the students to watch films. Although I think since some of those films are 'girls' films, I think you could get even more humour out of a middle aged wizard loving them:-)

The teletubbies reference was great though, and worked really well, and idea of Dom using fake ID on Penrose was genius!

Penrose is also on form. I loved him being proud of the flamingo pen, and impressed with his co-ordinated 4th years.

And finally, I know you said this wasn't edited, but here's some picky stuff:

I would prefer 'something of which Archibald Penrose was acutely aware' as a sentence structure.

Best line - 'not after the incident with the space hopper'

'Dom was sporting a pair of elf ears jauntily place on her head' is missing a 'd'#

'His entire 4th year group had filed in the subject line' should be 'filled in'

'My parent's decided to get divorced' doesn't need the apostrophe

Author's Response: Ahha, there were a few more girly films in there... but you're not allowed to reference Disney films (which is gutting) so I had to take a big wad of the films out. Good old Archie, with his chick flicks.

So, we've now heard a little about his 6th, 4th and 3rd years.. whos next?

Thanks for pointing thoes things out! I'll be editing shortly and changing that. Cheerss :D

And thanks for reviewing!

-AC

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