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Review:CloakAuror9 says:
The concept was very interesting since there's not much stories about Eileen's and Tobias' relationship in the archives or everywhere else. (Or at least I haven't read much.)

The characterisation was fantastic. I really get the whole 'my-wife's-a-wizard-so-maybe-she-can-make-everything-work-using-magic' idea and in fact I think your the first author to have applied that in a story.

Overall, I think the whole story worked. I did not find any mistakes, at all, so great job on that and I really enjoyed your story -it gave me a bit of time to relax and it was very enjoyable.

Happy Holidays,
CloakAuror9 xx

Author's Response: As I was writing, I looked around the site for others, but there is only a handful, and the majority of them are very dark fics. Completely different from the scene that just popped into my head one day and would not get out.

Tobias's take on magic is pretty fun to write, actually, I found. In canon we know he doesn't like magic, but then again he doesn't really like anything. But I think that he would have seen the uses of magic, even if he didn't like it. Or at least, that's how I wanted to write him.

Glad you enjoyed it!

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