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Review:ClearAsCrystalrEyes says:
I really liked this, however mid way I started to doubt it because, even though it was pretty well written, Hermione seemed a bit out of character. Though, I like how in the beginning you stated that Hermione was not happy with herself because her essay had not been completed yet. Still though, her actions seem very bold- and I like how you incorporated the Gryffindor bravery to explain why she was behaving the way she was. I don't think though that she would have given herself to him immediately, but it's a story so of course she can! I really liked George in this, I'm actually a huge Hermione/George supporter (along with Fred a bit) and I think George was portrayed quite nicely.

All in all though it was a very cute story and I like how you showed both their thoughts and perspective of the situation. And I actually like how you made Hermione blow off her essay at the end. Anyone would be stupid to leave George Weasley in that bed alone(;

There were a few errors, nothing too major and I'm sure they've been pointed out to you because this was for a contest.

Author's Response: Hey! Thank you so much for your kind review :)

I know Hermione was a teensy bit out of character but I really couldn't make this work with both of them being completely in-character! I am glad that you liked this over all though, I value your comments, especially because this was my first time writing George.

Glad to know you liked it all in all, and the ending and everything :)

Thanks a lot!!


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