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Review:katti4493 says:
Another good chapter, not so dramatic as the previous two, so it made a good contrast. It was also the best way to set up Helga's character and showing the difference from the humiliation of Godric and the revenge of Salazar to Helga's simplicity. Like I've said before I want more dialogue! But it's all a work in progress and this is shaping up to be a really interesting story! I can't wait to see what you do with Rowena, because to me she has always been one of the most enigmatic of the founders! I'll be reading when you next update!

Author's Response: Wow! Thanks for the reviews. I'm glad you like the stories, still working on Rowena's chapter which I did have but they won't approve it because of some issues so I have to re-work it a bit. Anyway, I know what you mean about the dialogue, but I'm not that good with dialogue to begin with. I always feel like I'm dragging it out a bit, but no worries there will be more in later chapters. I didn't put that much in the first few because it's a sort of introduction to the backgrounds of each of them, but as other characters are introduced and as they start to encounter each other there will be more conversation. Also on your note about earl vs. count I got it and will fix it at some point soon. I am not putting in all that much research into this because I really don't have the time so I'm making it up as I go along. There will probably be many similar mistakes and I do try to fix them if I or someone else catches them so thank you for that.

Have a nice holiday!
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