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Review:Woodrow Rynne says:
Well, first off, love the summary. It's very powerful, indeed. Now onto the real review-

How dare you say it was awful! It was in fact, far, faaar from it. I know how difficult it is to write down a Founders' Era fic. You have to grasp the language, the dialogue (although it may not be difficult for you :P), and you did very well. I love the starting- straight into the action.

Rowena- hmm..I liked how you described her. As well, how you mentioned she wasn't excellent in duelling spells. Most people describe the founders as perfect, so it was nice to see that she was, despite all, human. :)

One question though- why couldn't she help the muggles. As you said, she was invisible, /and/ a witch. She could have easily have gotten away from those ailing muggles and the latter could have attributed getting healed to a miracle of God or something? Just an idea...

A typo I spotted: Composing herself, she hurredly walked towards the street ~ hurriedly, right?

Nevertheless, this was a fantastic start to what I'm sure is going to be a great fic, should you choose to continue it! I'm so intrigued and curious to know who that mystery person is, to whom she goes.

Great work! :D

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

I guess I've began to fall in love with this story again, so there might even be an update soon! Spooky...

Thanks for reviewing, I'm glad that you enjoyed it!


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