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Review:Cirque Du Freak says:
Hey!

This was heartbreaking one-shot that I quite enjoyed. {: I've always shipped Neville/Luna since OotP and they have so much potential too!

I think the only thing that bothered me a little bit was the fact that the letters disintegrated, because Luna just doesn't strike me as a person who would let go of her friends for a moment. After all they went through together I don't think a man, any man, would have taken precedence over them.

I particularly liked the ending where Neville states that she's happy, because then maybe it'll be some closure for him to sort of try and move on from his life.

You had a few typos here and there, but nothing majourly out of place so well done. {:

xxx

Author's Response: Hey!
I think I am incapable of writing a happy one-shot; they always end up being heartbreaking. Neville and Luna are one of my OTPs, they are made for each other; seriously!

True but Rolf didn't take over her life it's just that Neville separated himself from Luna because he loved her and it hurt him to see her happy with someone else. Sorry if that was confusing
Typos? Well, I'll go back and fix them when I get a chance.
Thanks for the review; really helpful! :)
Jaz, x


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