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Review:AC_rules says:
Okay, I saw 'epilogue' at the beginning and I just knew that this was going to be a really really great story. I've wanted to read this for ages as it just looks so fabulous and it feels pretty good to have an excuse to start it.

You're writing style is so beautiful here, aha, I love it. But I think my favourite line has to be...

But now he lies still against the damp stone, the rain kissing his cheeks like she used to.

It was just so clever and... poignant. I like the sort of writing that, I'm thinking of a quote from Brave New World. erm... words like pins. You know, the sort of sentences that are show sharp that you have to sort of stop for a second.

I like the fact that you didn't mention her name... but I think you mentioned 'Ted' and 'Gideon' once each, it just seemed a nice sort of balace. The other ways you described them was great too 'her living lover' I liked that a lot.

Can't wait to continue reading. Then, at the end, I'll read it all forwards from the end. Mywhahah. Its going to be a blast :D

-AC

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