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Review:Serendipity1234 says:
Hey :)
I love this so far! I really love Deora and Dorcas and James and Peter and Sirius. Sirius became a lot more interesting in this chapter. More complex. So I like him a lot more now :)
And I loved James :)
I think you should put more of Mary, Lily, and Remus in, though. They're not mentioned very often. Especially Mary and Remus. Lily at least is mentioned sometimes but I feel like I don't know Mary yet.
Anyway, great chapter!
And she may be a little insane, but I guess I am too because I found that to be really funny. Sort of ironic that Sirius was in a sort of argument and hating her and then decided randomly to defend her. I really liked that, though, because it showed how he can be really loyal and adorably protective.
I think Deora must be rubbing off on him, too, because I think normally in the wizarding world people are more prone to hexing each other than punching.

Please update soon!

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