Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:Cassius Alcinder says:
It's me from the forums with your review!

So if you were going for something dark and creepy you definetely succeeded. The imagery of the owl and the creaking noises in the first paragraph did a great job of setting the tone, and all throughout you maintained a very good frightening and mysterious tone for the story.

You did an excellent job at portarying Roxanne's emotions, most specifically the pure, raw terror she was experiencing. You could really feel her fear and it relaly outs you on the dge of your seat. On a side note, I was picturing Roxanne being very young at the time of the story, and then when you mentioned she was 13 at the time I was a little surprised, but then that actually made the story scarier for me knowing that she should have been old enough to know better.

Great job writing a scray story, I definetely wouldn't want to be alone at night while reading this!

Author's Response: Hello :)
I originally wasn't planning on it being so dark - if you can believe it, it got rejected twice for being too graphic, so this is a toned down version! :P
I'm glad you didn't read it at night and alone - some of the others have.. and I feel bad :P
Thanks for the review :)

Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Repeat the number: 948
Submit Report: