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Review:onestop_hpfan18 says:
Hiya Molly! Finally here to review as requested, sorry about the delay btw -hugs- RL got a bit crazy, but now that it's winter break I plan on catching up on my review thread and other stories/books I've been meaning to read. Anyway, on with the review:

Flow -- I thought you did a good job with pace, and the voice is natural as well as amusing. You did a good job with slipping in the comedy aspect behind the words. It all kind of folded neatly as it came together, and some of your word choices were just brilliant for really showing the humour of each moment.

Characterisation -- I really like your Hugo, he's exactly as I've imagined he would be, not to mention he's a Hufflepuff, too. Got to love those Puffs, eh? :) Also, I totally can see Hugo as a Hufflepuff as he just seems to be the odd one out of his family, yet also on his own level of, dare I say it, coolness. ;)

Humour -- Love how you're handling this genre as well as the voice of Hugo you've developed. It's strong and I can already picture the type of character Hugo will shape out to be as the story progresses, as well as other characters like Kendra and Lore. Just by Hugo's observations of both these girls I was able to draw conclusions as to each of their characters and get a glimpse of the relationship Hugo has with each.

Over all, great first chapter, Molly, and I'll be reading the other two chapters for you as well so hang tight for those reviews as well. :)

Author's Response: Sorry for taking so long to get back to you, Leslie, but I'm so happy that you enjoyed the first chapter.

I'm always really worried that my characters don't go over as well as I think they do in my head, so it's good to know that you like his characterization.

Thank you so so so so much, dear!

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