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Review:Chocolate_Frog says:
Hi! This is Chocolate_Frog from the BvB review battle! :)

Starting off the review with some grammar errors I spotted! (Ooooh, fun. xD)

+ George had then ran over to them and had enlisted for his brothers help.

^ The "ran" should actually be "run". There should also be an apostrophe in "brother's".

+ Also, in a few parts, there are some things that should be capitalized but weren't (e.g. Death Eaters, Great Hall...)

Nitpicking aside, I thought this was a great one-shot. You captured all the sadness and emotion rather well, and it was an interesting take on Georgelina.

I liked how you started it off with a flashback of the battle. The juxtapositioning of how she felt when Fred proposed versus how she felt at the funeral was also very effective. The song lyrics also seemed to flow really well with the story, so good job on that! ^^

Overall, it was a great read. :)

~Chocolate_Frog

Author's Response: Hello :)

I'm actual glad you nitpicked! It's really hard to catch my own grammar mistakes and it's annoying knowing I missed some of them! So I'll be sure to go through and fix those few things!

I'm also really glad you like the emotion in it. For some reason, I'm really good at writing negative emotions into stories, which is sort of odd, but it pleases me that it translates well! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Glad you enjoyed!

~Grimmerz

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