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Review:CloakAuror9 says:
Whoa. That was dark. Very dark.

Okay...this story is really scary. I don't fear death but reading this story suddenly makes me think how I'm going to die (not in the waters, I hope.)

The pace is perfect. I can't say much about it since the story is just a one-shot but the order of events combined with the dialogues and descriptions are great.

The characterisation is fantastic! Especially Roxanne's and the little voice/monster in her head.

I'm so sad that this is just a one-shot but I think that's a good thing. Having another chapter would ruin the whole 'dark' effect.

Overall, great effort and I love the story! 9/10.

CloakAuror9 xx

Author's Response: Ah! Sorry about that! I was abit freaked out writing it, I have to admit :P
Yes, I wondered about another chapter but have decided against it - just like my other one-shot 'The Mirror's Reflection', some things are best left as one-shots!
Thanks so much for the review :)

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