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Review:gingersnape says:
Wow, this was amazing. I really liked our characterization of Roxanne because she was such a deep character with her thoughts about the monsters and what she could see and I felt like everything was shrouded in a fascinating sort of darkness from how you wrote her. I was a little confused at first, but as the story developed, I felt like I was as scared as she was and the whole thing was fabulous. You changed tenses a bit from past and present, but other than that, I thought this was very well done. :)

Annie

Author's Response: Thank you! I've never really thought of Roxanne and was planning this story, and she just popped into my head! I wanted it to be like a darkness she couldn't escape from, so from the sounds of it - it hopefully came across!
Ah! The tenses - I keep doing this! I'll go over it now :)
Thanks for the review :)


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